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coldmage
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Chest opening animation
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January 29, 2017, 04:13:59 pm
I have this chest opening animation, but I feel it is lacking something. Tell me what you think:
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dotodrymo
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 29, 2017, 07:17:28 pm
Nice animation! Because the chest is rocking back and then thumping forward, I think it makes more sense for the impact dust to happen when it lands. See if this is any better:
It's also a little weird that the chest top appears to be rounded when opening, but looks completely squared off once it's resting in the open position.
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coldmage
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 29, 2017, 08:45:16 pm
Thanks for the critique dotodrymo! I rounded out the chest, and also added a little bit of bounce to the animation, as seen here:
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eishiya
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 29, 2017, 09:16:18 pm
Try having the top start slow and speed up, instead of opening with a linear motion. That way, the momentum knocking the chest back will feel more natural, and the whole thing will probably feel more dynamic.
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coldmage
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 29, 2017, 10:15:28 pm
I removed a frame from the animation, do you think that did the trick?
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Curly
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 29, 2017, 11:04:12 pm
Removed some frames and added anticipation and bouncyness.
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transilience
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 30, 2017, 11:58:57 pm
i think it needs just a little after-shake at the end
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MysteryMeat
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Re: Chest opening animation
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January 31, 2017, 12:00:08 am
The chests in binding of Isaac might be a good object to study
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coldmage
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Re: Chest opening animation
Reply #8 on:
February 01, 2017, 11:16:06 pm
Thanks for all the critique! I tried to add the bounce to the beginning and end of the animation:
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yaomon17
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Re: Chest opening animation
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February 02, 2017, 06:47:10 am
Here is an old thread with some chesty stuff that might help:
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=21686.0
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