i dunno, most comics on the web are either overbearing nonsense thats just too obnoxious to be funny or just insist on spelling out the humour as if youre retarded. (
see)
infact, I got the idea from another comic:

obviously not-funny as the dude insists on making it crystal clear at how confused he is, when I saw it, I thought it needed more subtlety and to perhaps expand on the idea to make it a bit better
my main goal was not for it to appear obnoxious or pretentious, which I think was reached