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Re: [C+C] Forest Ruins

Reply #10 on: December 20, 2016, 08:43:50 pm
The grass looks much better.   :y:

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Re: [C+C] Forest Ruins

Reply #11 on: December 21, 2016, 01:55:30 am
supe rlovely, indeed on a whole different level compared with how your villag epiece started out.

THough get this atmospheric warm shining sunlight in
just a color edit, exept I filled the floor to the left with a darker shade, bc it felt quite bad in terms of seperation.



on another note, I feel like you use far too much dither. It doesn't really work for the trees or for the cloud reflection.
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Re: [C+C] Forest Ruins

Reply #12 on: December 21, 2016, 02:49:37 am
the clouds for sure need to tone it down, but on the trees I still think it's a color problem and not an issue with the art.
The problem is too MUCH definition between the dark and midtone, if the darks on those leaves were turned down a bit it would level out to a nice textured look I think.
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Re: [C+C] Forest Ruins

Reply #13 on: December 21, 2016, 05:37:15 am
Love it. Gotta go against the grain here though - the edits may have a stronger sense of light and improved realism, but they don't have the same charm and sheer level of comfyness that the first version's colors have in my opinion.

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Re: [C+C] Forest Ruins

Reply #14 on: December 21, 2016, 05:55:47 am
A good point by kullenberg, actually. You might be able to get the best of both worlds by messing around with saturation and brightness some, though!
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Re: [C+C] Forest Ruins

Reply #15 on: December 21, 2016, 05:32:10 pm

Thanks for the feedback! I think it looks better now. I also added some texture to the water.