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Offline AppleGirl

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Need opinions on this art

on: November 11, 2016, 02:40:59 am
Hello,
I these sprites I'm using for a game, and I think they match very well. I posted both. The one I'm having trouble with is the one in the blue sweater. I think his hair looks fine, but for some reason my brother doesn't like it. The hairstyle we're going for is like this: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/5a/c7/c0/5ac7c07984dea2b797d142e6ade978aa.jpg


Please leave your thoughts and critique. Thanks  :)

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Re: Need opinions on this art

Reply #1 on: November 18, 2016, 08:38:45 pm
Just made a quick sketch, let me know what you think.

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Re: Need opinions on this art

Reply #2 on: November 18, 2016, 09:16:31 pm
They guy in the blue sweater looks like hes shrugging. Is that intentional?

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Re: Need opinions on this art

Reply #3 on: November 29, 2016, 06:49:55 pm
Nope he's not supposed to be shrugging, but I fixed that. Thanks Fieldren, that looks way better!  :y:

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Re: Need opinions on this art

Reply #4 on: November 29, 2016, 06:54:26 pm
Alright, I fixed his shoulders (thanks Tezca for pointing that out  :)) I also made his eye color a little darker.