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Iddle, Run, Jump and Combo

on: October 28, 2016, 04:57:50 pm
Hello, I just make some animations for the game im working and im good with most of it, only want some tips if someone have one.
Running
Iddle
Jumping and falling
Attack (3x Combo)
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Re: Iddle, Run, Jump and Combo

Reply #1 on: October 28, 2016, 09:59:32 pm
I think the legs swap a bit of color on the run, and it looked like there's a bit of a lurch that could be fixed with a bit of blur or an extra frame.

I could use a bit more arm movement/shape and maybe a bit less head bob.

The jump/fall is missing the actual jump.  There should be at least a frame of the character squishing down in order to get power.  The front arm also loses a pixel.

The attack could go for a bit more follow up between swings.  A good way to do this would be to add in another extra frame immediately after he finishes the swing, with a bit of blur still on it.


I'm kind of nitpicking, but they look really good.   It's pretty clear what's what, which is really important for this size/level of detail.