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[WIP] Some early attemps for a game

on: October 15, 2016, 11:07:37 pm
Hi, Im startig a game and i have some work done, but i have some issues with the colors, do you think that this look color cohesive? I don't know if I'm doing this right :0.



Also this one, but i just changed brightness/contrast/color deepen, not the palette



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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #1 on: October 15, 2016, 11:31:39 pm
For starters, what tone are you trying to set here?
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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #2 on: October 16, 2016, 12:00:31 am
Oh, how it's a first project I don't go for something very deep, its just a funny story with some wacky characters and overall nice tone.
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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #3 on: October 16, 2016, 12:05:28 am
Brighter colors generally help with a cheerier tone, but you should try adding some perspective.  The road makes me thing that everything is facing top down, but the house looks like you're looking at it straight on from a standing position.  The house needs to be a bit more 3D, otherwise it looks like a sticker on a board.



The character could also use a bit more contrast.  He looks good, but there's a lot of colors that either don't need to be there, or need to be differentiated a bit more.

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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #4 on: October 16, 2016, 04:30:19 am
The perspective in it's current state is very all over the place. What style are you trying to mimic. A mega-man like perspective, or something like LoZ?

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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #5 on: October 16, 2016, 08:04:17 pm
Actually I just realised that i should have use more references for the perspective, but I was trying a top-down pespective, like Mother 3 or Pokemon style. How about this? It's kind of rushed and i have to fix the anti-aliasing since I just edited a bunch of stuff, but its to get the idea.



Also, about the colors, yeah i tend to use low saturated tones since im not used to pixel art, but i'll try something more mother 3 style here too, that game have very happy colors. thank you!
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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #6 on: October 16, 2016, 11:43:09 pm
With that type of perspective, you would be able to see the top of the roof and the sides(since it s a trapezoidal prism-ish sort of shape) like this:

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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #7 on: October 17, 2016, 01:54:04 am
Oh no, the roof its more like this

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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #8 on: October 17, 2016, 02:13:05 am
Ahh, my b. Got confused by the front   :P. You would want something like this (depending on which picture representation you are going with, with/without trapezoidal front view) :y:

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Re: [WIP] Some early attemps for a game

Reply #9 on: October 17, 2016, 03:36:34 pm
How about this? I fixed the anti-aliasing and put some roof tiles. I still have to fix the colors, that's the hardest part x'd

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