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BadMrBox's Pixelart

on: October 09, 2006, 04:40:52 pm
Hi, im new to this place. Nice to meet you :).
I have been thinking about maybe (just maybe) someday making a fighting game so training up the old pixeling would be a wise choice (it's a wise choice anyway as I am rather rusty and never really been doing large sprites).

What I know is wrong with this image is that there is to little colors used, her hands are not finished and even as I wanted her to be tall her legs seems to be a bit to long. What do you think?


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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #1 on: October 09, 2006, 05:42:09 pm
i thnik you have overdone the legs, her torso is good, but the hair looks kinda weird, heres a little edit on the hair to show you what i mean:


very good, and gl on making your game ;D

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #2 on: October 09, 2006, 05:53:29 pm
Ah, yes. I forgot to mention that I wasn't to happy about the hair either. It doesn't look to good but yet I want her to have long hair in a ponytail of some sort but thanks for the edit anyway. It gave me something to think about  :)

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #3 on: October 09, 2006, 06:21:18 pm
oh ok sorry didnt knmow that was what you were looking for  :)  good luck with it ;)

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #4 on: October 09, 2006, 10:27:37 pm
Mr Box,

Welcome to Pixelation! Nifty little girl-fu sprite.

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #5 on: October 10, 2006, 03:05:20 am
Been working on this one for a bit. If you like, I could list the things I changed and why, but that would take awhile, so I'll just let the edit speak for itself for now. Just let me know if you want more details on what I did.

   

The overall proportions are still a bit far from being quite right, but I got it closer anyway, and cut your color use down a lot (35 to 15). Ignore the pants, I wasn't sure if they were supposed to be leather or denim, so I just went nuts on them and never even finished them up. Hopefully you get something useful out of it! I had fun, either way. :P

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #6 on: October 10, 2006, 05:36:59 am
Sweet Edit!

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #7 on: October 10, 2006, 03:50:09 pm
Oh, nice edit Pawige! Very sweet indeed
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I wasn't sure if they were supposed to be leather or denim
It was from the beginning meant to be leather but I... eh, changed my mind somewhere halftrough, heh.

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Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart

Reply #8 on: October 11, 2006, 03:42:35 am
 I really like the edit pawige. That looks pro! I would recommend you to take that edit to advice.