[C+C] Airship Captain

[Hoximius]

I feel like the anatomy is a bit off and I think it's the limbs.

Can someone point out the direction I should be going towards?

[MysteryMeat]

Crotch is dangling a bit too low, I'd say. when fully extended the elbow should touch home right as the waist starts.

[Hoximius]

 Hi there. 

Update:



-Yeah, the elbows rustle me a bit (especially the left elbow) ,but I think I got it right.

P.S. Thank you for helping me out. I forgot to mention that in the previous post. 

[MysteryMeat]

See though now the forearm looks short! Try repositioning the arm a bit, both halves of the arm should be about the same length!
And no worries, it's fun being able to help folks haha

[Hoximius]

A bit of an improvement.

[Rydin]

How can he command an airship with no face? 

I think his left leg being smaller did not improve the overall sense of volume. He just altogether seems flat instead of being a 3d shape in space. 

The boot on his right foot is wrong. Try to stand with both your feet pointing like that and you will learn how uncomfortable it is for you.

[Hoximius]

So yeah long delay, but I redesigned the captain a bit more.

[Ambivorous]

I must say he's less noticeably a captain in this second iteration.



I tried to fix your dimensions with as little editing as possible. You're going to have to try get him back to looking more like a captain still though.