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Offline TheForgottenOne

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Space moais

on: September 21, 2016, 03:10:07 am
Hello!

I did a species of mountainous spatial valley, with moais.
I try to use another type of shade, of which I use regularly


I want to know your opinions

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Re: Space moais

Reply #1 on: September 21, 2016, 06:49:58 am
Honestly it feels kind of empty, like there should be something in the middle of all that . Like a spaceship hovering above the water or some kind of floating temple. As it is it's just a pretty but kinda focusless landscape.
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Re: Space moais

Reply #2 on: September 21, 2016, 07:45:43 pm
Love the atmopsphere and colours! I agree its in need of a stronger focal point, and i think the pattern you used for the sky is a bit odd. maybe try blocking in some clouds, and you could use them to frame the beam of light (assuming it's meant to be the focus)

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Re: Space moais

Reply #3 on: September 23, 2016, 09:34:25 pm
Those circle patterns and palette are marvelous, but I think you can make this beam a bit thicker to make a central point of landscape. Also I was never sure about gradient in pixelart... Maybe it's just me, but I think it shouldn't be used in this type of art... But I'm just a newbie, so I'm probably wrong. :P

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Re: Space moais

Reply #4 on: September 29, 2016, 02:15:53 am
Thanks for the Feedback!!
Im going to fix some things, and give the landscape a central point