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Face Gif

on: September 29, 2016, 02:31:47 am
Hello, i made my first pixel art animation

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So i would like some destructive critics xD

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Re: Face Gif

Reply #1 on: September 29, 2016, 04:33:38 am
The profile size suffers. There is no worse way to damage your pixel craftsmanship than to shrink it down and let the computer do the math.

How are these three elements being lit? Or do they produce their own light? And if so, why don't they illuminate the features surrounding themselves? At the moment it's just three disconnected organs in completely black space. No depth to the mouth. No socket for the eyes to sit in.

I imagine this on a busted television  :crazy:

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Re: Face Gif

Reply #2 on: September 29, 2016, 05:32:03 am
I accidentally gave it a bit of a flicker, but I popped in some various tweaks including a sped-up framerate and a closer-to-100 resolution, as well as some animationy bits:
Edit: spoilered it, it seems a bit seizure-inducing to leave unhidden. Click only if not photosensitive!
« Last Edit: September 29, 2016, 05:52:02 am by MysteryMeat »
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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