Is the lineart looking alright?

[Vertigo]

Yeah, the last one looks pretty good! The only thing i could suggest is to make chequered fragments of sky a bit wider. Also yellow stars look a bit too lighty, comparing to other ones.

[Yokai90]

I increased the height to make it a bit wider Vertigo. And changed the saturation a little for the yellow stars.
Any better? .o.

[heyy13]

You've done so much better! I especially love the yolk. The only con i have is that at 1x1 resolution it looks a bit like a flower due to the shape of the white. It might help it read better if it's a more stereotypical fried egg shape. Otherwise, great!

You've improved loads!