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Random kit.

on: October 06, 2006, 05:34:41 pm
well here is a small kit i made in my spare time.
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Re: Random kit.

Reply #1 on: October 06, 2006, 05:36:33 pm
Please don't make the pictures link to imageshack. That's the most annoying thing ever. Just get rid of the [url] stuff when you post.
There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.

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Re: Random kit.

Reply #2 on: October 06, 2006, 07:43:13 pm
oh sorry, if anyone could, can you help me imprive this, because compared to all the other peieces of work on this site, this is crap :crazy:

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Re: Random kit.

Reply #3 on: October 06, 2006, 07:52:51 pm
I think you should read some tuts about the basics of pixel art, have you tried Tusgumo's and St0ven's ( http://www.spriteart.com )?
these won't make you a great artist in a day, practice is the key.


About your set, the colors on the building are too close to each other, the cars need shading (choose a light source and put highlights and shadows).
The grass needs less saturation ^^

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Re: Random kit.

Reply #4 on: October 07, 2006, 08:06:58 am
ok thanks, hopefully i will have an improvement soon :D

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Re: Random kit.

Reply #5 on: October 07, 2006, 10:20:57 am
 Really good work I found you did. It looks accurate like dirt, cars, etc. I would focus on the color. Vary your hues for your shading. Make the highlight yellowish and shadows bluesih. They also need contrast. Your grass blades should look more realistic. Make the grass grow upward instead of straight lines. In best regards, good luck!