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Re: [Platformer] How to get better?

Reply #10 on: September 17, 2016, 02:12:06 am
KB90: That's a definite improvement!
I think BadMoodTaylor's suggestion to vary the bricks is a nice one and their suggestion to experiment with colours and values is also good, though the rest of their edit makes the background overwhelm the foreground.

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Re: [Platformer] How to get better?

Reply #11 on: September 17, 2016, 02:16:38 am
KB90: That's a definite improvement!
I think BadMoodTaylor's suggestion to vary the bricks is a nice one and their suggestion to experiment with colours and values is also good, though the rest of their edit makes the background overwhelm the foreground.

Let me reiterate the "I was just playing around with the color" part—I agree most of those edits ended up being terrible.  Just an example of how to experiment if you aren't sure what else to do.  I was trying to test out if making the background lighter than the foreground would work here but didn't turn out good.
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