Warrior

[[Friends] Ro$$]

I'm working on animations for an enemy. It's still WIP, but I feel like the animation is good enough to get some critique on it.
Thanks for the help!


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[MysteryMeat]

Too slow, I removed two frames and fixed a frame where the knee froze slightly and another where the leg wasn't extending enough in preparation for contact with ground!

[[Friends] Ro$$]

Wow that's a huge improvement! Thanks Meat. I can't even see much to improve.
I had to enlarge it and I fixed some smoothness issues. Still need to work on that head.

[[Friends] Ro$$]

The beginnings of a slash

[MysteryMeat]

Some small tweaks, felt like it was missing a frame and didn't stop at the right point to me!

[[Friends] Ro$$]

Thanks Meat! I think that one is a bit too far extended, his wrist would twist off I think.
I did a couple little edit to try to fix this.
Possibility 1:

Possibility 2:

[MysteryMeat]

I'd say number 2, looks snappier. It still has that feeling of an incomplete movement though, like the swing's not gone all the way it needs to.

[[Friends] Ro$$]

Here's a little update, hopefully it helps some. It's mainly a fix to the legs and I added in the crouch that I noticed you had done in your edit.

Edit: Actually I really like what you have done with the legs, especially the little twist in his foot at the end, so I've switched the legs to yours. I still think the sword goes a bit too far back in your edit though.

[[Friends] Ro$$]

Added some more to the slash. Sorry about a bit weird timing, updating to the newest OS broke the software I was using to compile gifs The shockwave is still very wip.

[MysteryMeat]

The landing needs a bit more followthrough, duck his head and shoulders into the slam some i think