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Warrior

on: August 27, 2016, 04:52:36 am
I'm working on animations for an enemy. It's still WIP, but I feel like the animation is good enough to get some critique on it.
Thanks for the help!


Old:
Run
V1:
Slash
V1:
V2:
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Re: Running Warrior

Reply #1 on: August 27, 2016, 10:01:55 am
Too slow, I removed two frames and fixed a frame where the knee froze slightly and another where the leg wasn't extending enough in preparation for contact with ground!
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Re: Running Warrior

Reply #2 on: August 28, 2016, 04:32:04 am

Wow that's a huge improvement! Thanks Meat. I can't even see much to improve.
I had to enlarge it and I fixed some smoothness issues. Still need to work on that head.
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Re: Warrior

Reply #3 on: October 01, 2016, 06:05:19 pm
The beginnings of a slash

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Re: Warrior

Reply #4 on: October 01, 2016, 09:17:04 pm
Some small tweaks, felt like it was missing a frame and didn't stop at the right point to me!
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Re: Warrior

Reply #5 on: October 01, 2016, 11:37:40 pm
Thanks Meat! I think that one is a bit too far extended, his wrist would twist off I think.
I did a couple little edit to try to fix this.
Possibility 1:

Possibility 2:
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Re: Warrior

Reply #6 on: October 02, 2016, 12:23:16 am
I'd say number 2, looks snappier. It still has that feeling of an incomplete movement though, like the swing's not gone all the way it needs to.
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Re: Warrior

Reply #7 on: October 02, 2016, 06:08:00 am
Here's a little update, hopefully it helps some. It's mainly a fix to the legs and I added in the crouch that I noticed you had done in your edit.

Edit: Actually I really like what you have done with the legs, especially the little twist in his foot at the end, so I've switched the legs to yours. I still think the sword goes a bit too far back in your edit though.
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Re: Warrior

Reply #8 on: October 12, 2016, 04:25:33 am
Added some more to the slash. Sorry about a bit weird timing, updating to the newest OS broke the software I was using to compile gifs :( The shockwave is still very wip.
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Re: Warrior

Reply #9 on: October 12, 2016, 10:28:34 pm
The landing needs a bit more followthrough, duck his head and shoulders into the slam some i think
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