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Re: Towards The Pantheon (2D RPG)

Reply #20 on: February 23, 2017, 10:55:31 am
I think the dense trees need some tweaking, it's too obvious a cut and paste job.
I'll definitely be plinking a vote on greenlight though, been following this for a while!
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Reply #21 on: March 07, 2017, 12:48:58 am
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Reply #22 on: March 23, 2017, 03:13:57 pm
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Re: Towards The Pantheon (2D RPG)

Reply #23 on: March 30, 2017, 04:16:14 am
While no doubt there's a lot of potential and the game's shaping up very nicely, I find you tend to use a lot of stiff silhouettes, poses, mapping and stuff -- the rendering is quite nice, you do have a nice art style as well but you pose your things stiffly.

I'd recommend trying to do some more interesting and organic silhouettes, the sprite here looks neat but the silhouette looks like a Ditto!
 
I did a very quick 2 minute touchup to show how you could break shapes down, don't be afraid of using strong angles and stuff, it's gonna make your stuff look even better.

Other places I see the stiffness are in overly round and inorganic trees, the way characters are positioned in the battle scene, menus... Change that one little thing and I feel your art will have a noticeable and quick improvement! ~

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Reply #24 on: May 22, 2017, 03:47:03 am
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Reply #25 on: May 28, 2017, 01:40:09 pm
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Reply #26 on: June 03, 2017, 07:13:19 pm
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Reply #27 on: July 04, 2017, 07:57:51 pm
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Reply #28 on: September 07, 2017, 06:54:05 pm
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Reply #29 on: October 01, 2017, 04:25:00 pm
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