AuthorTopic: [C+C] [WIP] Opinions on composition and advice on anatomy  (Read 1153 times)

Offline TPoe

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Hi, been messing around with this for a few weeks and I've decided I'm gonna finish it.

Just wanted to get some opinions on it before I spend a lot of time on it because I've never done anything this large before.

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Re: [C+C] [WIP] Opinions on composition and advice on anatomy

Reply #1 on: August 24, 2016, 12:00:25 am
Mobile reply, so ill keep it short. I just had to reply as soon as possible cause this is already looking great. My (admittedly amateur) eyes see no real anatomy issues anywhere. Composition-wise, i think the only element that weakens it is the big circle. The guy isnt centered in it, but if you did center him in there, it would either shift the cirle off center or the comosition would feel too centered if you shifted the guy. I think its unessessary to the image.

As an alternative, if you want to have something to border the upper half of the image or something around the guy, the chain could be brought back from behind the guy on the left to replace the circle. It would make the chain a bigger element. Or, if you want to keep a graphic element for the background, you could do a silhouette behind him of a landscape element or relevant location (church, mausoleum, somewhere else that might have grave stones?).

Looks freakin awesome so far, tho. Cant wait to see where you go with it. Love the colors, too.
« Last Edit: August 24, 2016, 11:39:46 am by Squiggly_P »