AuthorTopic: Is the lineart looking alright?  (Read 4735 times)

Offline Vertigo

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Re: Is the lineart looking alright?

Reply #10 on: September 06, 2016, 07:07:41 pm
Yeah, the last one looks pretty good! The only thing i could suggest is to make chequered fragments of sky a bit wider. Also yellow stars look a bit too lighty, comparing to other ones.

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Re: Is the lineart looking alright?

Reply #11 on: September 08, 2016, 09:07:32 pm
I increased the height to make it a bit wider Vertigo. And changed the saturation a little for the yellow stars.
Any better? .o.

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Re: Is the lineart looking alright?

Reply #12 on: September 11, 2016, 11:21:48 am
You've done so much better! I especially love the yolk. The only con i have is that at 1x1 resolution it looks a bit like a flower due to the shape of the white. It might help it read better if it's a more stereotypical fried egg shape. Otherwise, great! :D

You've improved loads!