sans.

[IIRawsomeII]

I have made a drawing of sans. and I would like some critique please  .



Facts:

The image uses 18 colours.

(That is all I could think of)

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Thanks!

[MysteryMeat]

He's tilting pretty far back, how is he not falling down?

[Tori]

He's tilting pretty far back, how is he not falling down?

Michael Jackson's lean but backwards  lol

just kidding, I hope it doesn't get me banned ><

[IIRawsomeII]

Fixed It!

[infinitylsx]

Fixed It!

I think his feet and legs need a little more definition. I'm assuming he has slippers on and I can't really tell where they start with how light both the colors are, making it have the appearance that he has huge feet.

[IIRawsomeII]

I'm assuming you mean this:

[infinitylsx]

I'm assuming you mean this:

Exactly what I mean!

Another section where I can see a possible improvement would be on what appears to be the fur of the jacket.
This part: Spoiler

At a smaller size, it's a bit harder to make out the wool from his teeth/face. Though it's possible, it's not very apparent right away. Perhaps if you added some shading into it, it'd help make it much more distinguishable.

[Dreadnaught]

I like how alive the character looks.

One thing I would point out would be the outline of the character. Typically you don't let pixels create 90 degree angles on an outline. This is hard to explain, easier to show.

[IIRawsomeII]

I'm assuming you mean this:

Exactly what I mean!

Another section where I can see a possible improvement would be on what appears to be the fur of the jacket.
This part: Spoiler

At a smaller size, it's a bit harder to make out the wool from his teeth/face. Though it's possible, it's not very apparent right away. Perhaps if you added some shading into it, it'd help make it much more distinguishable.

Added the shading you suggested but I don't know if that helps:

I like how alive the character looks.

One thing I would point out would be the outline of the character. Typically you don't let pixels create 90-degree angles on an outline. This is hard to explain, easier to show.

Fixed the outline according to what you said, (Or at least what i think you meant).

[IIRawsomeII]

Pushed!