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sans.

on: August 04, 2016, 02:36:00 am
I have made a drawing of sans. and I would like some critique please  ::).



Facts:

The image uses 18 colours.

(That is all I could think of)

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Thanks!

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Re: sans.

Reply #1 on: August 04, 2016, 05:06:21 am
He's tilting pretty far back, how is he not falling down?
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Re: sans.

Reply #2 on: August 04, 2016, 05:19:50 am
He's tilting pretty far back, how is he not falling down?

Michael Jackson's lean but backwards  lol ::)

just kidding, I hope it doesn't get me banned ><

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Re: sans.

Reply #3 on: August 04, 2016, 05:57:16 am
Fixed It!

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Re: sans.

Reply #4 on: August 04, 2016, 09:04:14 pm
Fixed It!


I think his feet and legs need a little more definition. I'm assuming he has slippers on and I can't really tell where they start with how light both the colors are, making it have the appearance that he has huge feet.

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Re: sans.

Reply #5 on: August 04, 2016, 09:53:45 pm
I'm assuming you mean this:

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Re: sans.

Reply #6 on: August 04, 2016, 10:16:50 pm
I'm assuming you mean this:


Exactly what I mean!

Another section where I can see a possible improvement would be on what appears to be the fur of the jacket.
This part:

At a smaller size, it's a bit harder to make out the wool from his teeth/face. Though it's possible, it's not very apparent right away. Perhaps if you added some shading into it, it'd help make it much more distinguishable.

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Re: sans.

Reply #7 on: August 04, 2016, 10:44:23 pm
I like how alive the character looks.

One thing I would point out would be the outline of the character. Typically you don't let pixels create 90 degree angles on an outline. This is hard to explain, easier to show.

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Re: sans.

Reply #8 on: August 09, 2016, 03:47:25 am
I'm assuming you mean this:


Exactly what I mean!

Another section where I can see a possible improvement would be on what appears to be the fur of the jacket.
This part:

At a smaller size, it's a bit harder to make out the wool from his teeth/face. Though it's possible, it's not very apparent right away. Perhaps if you added some shading into it, it'd help make it much more distinguishable.

Added the shading you suggested but I don't know if that helps:



I like how alive the character looks.

One thing I would point out would be the outline of the character. Typically you don't let pixels create 90-degree angles on an outline. This is hard to explain, easier to show.



Fixed the outline according to what you said, (Or at least what i think you meant).


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Re: sans.

Reply #9 on: August 10, 2016, 04:50:11 pm
Pushed!