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wannabe a bunny [c+c]

on: July 03, 2016, 08:15:34 am

only saturated colors + 2 greys, left ear is too "perfect" for what i wanted  :blind:

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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #1 on: July 03, 2016, 02:54:51 pm
Why did you add the purple around her head? is it as a sort of outline or anti-alias?

I feel like her left ear is kind of pointy and jaggy, personally I think it would look great if both ears were "perfect". It also looks a bit weird that the right ear isn't connected to hear head.
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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #2 on: July 03, 2016, 08:44:07 pm
Why did you add the purple around her head? is it as a sort of outline or anti-alias?
Anti-alias
I feel like her left ear is kind of pointy and jaggy, personally I think it would look great if both ears were "perfect". It also looks a bit weird that the right ear isn't connected to hear head.
ok, cleared the concept a bit, also got advice on Slack
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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #3 on: July 03, 2016, 09:44:48 pm
I don't think the outline is a good idea, it ruins the nice silhouette you had and looks a bit clumsy.
I also think the ears need a different color to fit the rest.

I like how vibrant it is though, and it's super cute!  :y:

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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #4 on: July 04, 2016, 12:06:29 am
I don't think the outline is a good idea, it ruins the nice silhouette you had and looks a bit clumsy.
I also think the ears need a different color to fit the rest.

I like how vibrant it is though, and it's super cute!  :y:

alright, is this better?
« Last Edit: July 04, 2016, 02:42:30 am by PixelPiledriver »

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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #5 on: July 05, 2016, 10:35:42 pm
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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #6 on: July 06, 2016, 05:44:59 am
i feel like that edit loses the somewhat neony feel of the original, good corrections but the blue shadows looked good as did the way they drew the eyes.
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Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]

Reply #7 on: July 06, 2016, 06:14:21 am
Def don't take the edit as fixes, just another path.
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