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[WIP] Spacehaven, my first pixelart

on: June 24, 2016, 05:12:44 pm
Hi Guys,
I just started with pixelart and would really love to hear your opinion about my first work :)
So please let me know what I could do in a different way and what looks weird.
I am still uncertain if the perspective of the spaceship is wrong. :/

Thanks Slaytanic


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Re: [WIP] Spacehaven, my first pixelart

Reply #1 on: June 24, 2016, 05:16:14 pm

Nice work :) 

A few things that jump out at me

The readability on the thing on the bridge. Is it a luggage trolly of some sort?
The red lights and things on the buildings are also extremely vague and I cannot understand what's happening there.
The colors of the buildings are a tad too similar, some more contrast will help a lot. 
JAGGLIES! a lot of irregular edges.

Also there seems to be a soft glow effect from the top right, which makes this not a pixelart, but I'm not a purist, so I don't really care.
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