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[c&c] Cluttered Living Room

on: June 16, 2016, 03:25:34 pm
more of the my game MC's apartment. this time, her messy living room. this isn't final, but I felt like I was lingering too long on it, so I thought I should post it up for some crit as well. mainly looking for opinions on the lighting, since I don't really know what I'm doing, haha

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Re: [c&c] Cluttered Living Room

Reply #1 on: June 16, 2016, 11:17:56 pm
That cigarette's a fire hazard!
Good work though, you can really feel the slobbish personality of the apartment's owner here.
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Re: [c&c] Cluttered Living Room

Reply #2 on: June 17, 2016, 05:25:24 am
It has so much life and personality! I love it! The colors are spot on! I particularly love the dust effect!

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Re: [c&c] Cluttered Living Room

Reply #3 on: June 17, 2016, 03:25:59 pm
If tiling isn't too much of an issue, you can add an even more slobbish look by making some of the furniture and other items uneven, rather than perfectly aligned horizontally/vertically.