God these comments are funny. XD
Here's some thought from what I can see,
the hair seems like a comb over, instead of volume, you know teased ? it's got that super saiyan kinda volume. Just points in direction and such, I think I'll try create one and see how it comes out, then we'll know if what im saying has any meaning. XD
Your character does look wonky, but it really has an interesting look to it, how ever what they're suggesting looks more professional and may get you further.
The eyes aren't as circular, rather oval or such, giving it a more uhm stern look.. a brighter look. yes she looks bright, killer and all. not ... goof ball.
The suggested goggles are more in shape, and isn't like a piece of cloth over her face rather the idea of leather ? like the one you're working on is currently smoothed out over her face and ends anywhere, you want it to protect her eyes, it needs some depth/dimension to make up for the fact that it's on her face and not apart of her skin.
The smile is lovelier, nothing much to it, yours currently looks funky.. and a button for a nose.
The chin is more defined, like pointy old man shoes.
From there the chin moves up towards the jaw bone, and up towards her ear.
under that reveals her neck that's tuck under a puffy russian jacket. XD You're using three shades of color for the hair, I noticed this now, one difference i see between the provided sample is that the brown has more thickness to it, but yeah i'd like to try this one too. :3 I'll probably make a mess of it but to see three different art styles tried on one character, would be nice.
