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jkilla
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My sprites
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September 28, 2006, 10:46:43 pm
heres some of my works i did a month ago how do you like them?
most of them were low palette works for example the skeleton is 4 colors
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VictorR
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Re: helmet of a warrior
Reply #1 on:
September 28, 2006, 11:38:27 pm
Looks a litle odd..Should me rounder at the top..Also the hair makes it look like his head is to the left facing his left shoulder..even it out..
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Souly
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Re: helmet of a warrior
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September 29, 2006, 02:53:08 am
Dithering metal makes it look dirty.
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jkilla
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Re: helmet of a warrior
Reply #3 on:
September 29, 2006, 03:20:06 am
its supposed too look kinda dirty/battle worn
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pixelblink
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Re: helmet of a warrior
Reply #4 on:
September 29, 2006, 05:04:22 am
Looks like a good start - it's got potential.
A few critiques though... the shape of the helmet is off completely unless he's got a deformed head underneath. The visor perspective looks reversed as well or least could use some rounding out to curve with the helmet.
The rest of your pieces I won't comment on except to say that the car looks like one out of GTA1 and there's way too much NPA gradients going on that are boosting the colour count through the roof.
I think you've got a ways to go but, if you break it on down to the basics of pixel art and listen to the rest of the gang here, you'll learn it all in no time at all.
Would love to see future updates from you. Keep at it
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jkilla
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Re: My sprites
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September 29, 2006, 05:16:22 am
thanks for the comment yes i am pretty uch just starting in pixel art but i like the comments and needs for improvement i know with the colection there is massive amounts of colors because i added a gradient to the background so they could not be ripped as easily because they are original and i made most of them for my game see sig.
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pixelblink
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Re: My sprites
Reply #6 on:
September 29, 2006, 05:30:44 am
while we're at it, I thought to help you by giving you this google image search:
http://images.google.ca/images?svnum=10&hl=en&safe=off&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&sa=X&oi=spell&resnum=0&ct=result&cd=1&q=medieval+helmets&spell=1
No reference = plenty of room for error
Reference = plenty of opportunity to make it great the first time around
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Aeon Vision
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Re: My sprites
Reply #7 on:
September 29, 2006, 07:20:54 pm
Hmm, i've seen that warrior head before.
And not under your name, on a runescape forum.
So there is a ripper involved i think.
I'm not acusing anybody yet, but i will get to the bottom of this.
You've got potential.
On the dragon: make some shading parts bigger, you've now done only some high contrast stripes.
the lineart needs some cleaning up, but its pretty nice overall :-).
Also i'd suggest some AA-ing(= Anti Aliasing).
http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/images/609666080.png
Tutorial made by Halfdemon.
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MoD
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mnky
Re: My sprites
Reply #8 on:
September 29, 2006, 07:44:03 pm
In your large image, several of those don't look like pixel art at all. Specifically, the car, several of the guns, and the building. As for the art itself, basic technique and some grounding in lighting would be a HUGE plus.
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jkilla
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Re: My sprites
Reply #9 on:
September 29, 2006, 10:52:43 pm
ok thanks for the comments i fixed the image with the many sprites and took out the bad ones/ ones that wernt pixel art
any further comments/helpful hints
by the way the dragon was a quick work if i have time i may aa it and ditther the body in better
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