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Box Dude :D [WIP]

on: September 27, 2006, 09:03:45 pm
Well hey guys, haven't been on in a long long time  :P and i haven't pixel-ed in about 6 or 7 months so i might be rusty ( even thow i was rusty 6 months ago also  :-\ ) Well heres a Char i got from the Lineart exchange. I dunno but i have seen a char like this before and i just really liked him ;D, i am going 2 change the Brown paper bag for a Cardboard box, just seems kooler that way...well here it is :D just started him so i don't really aspect alota Crits  :hehe:

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Edit: Also working on this for an Avatar :D

« Last Edit: September 28, 2006, 02:15:16 am by ..::Naso::.. »

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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #1 on: September 27, 2006, 09:37:11 pm
His right knee seems too small. The pose is nice and its a good idea.

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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #2 on: September 27, 2006, 11:23:52 pm
Terribly sorry for the double post.
I did a quick edit, hope you don't mind.



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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #3 on: September 27, 2006, 11:27:59 pm
the characters name is actually faust. hes from guilty gear.
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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #4 on: September 28, 2006, 12:23:35 am
@Crl: yea i saw that he said it was Faust but i have an idea of a char similar 2 him but, so iam going with what i want em 2 look :D

@VictorR: Heh, thanks for the edit, but your edit has alota problems in it. Mostly in there, there is like 4 dif light sources and theres a pillow shade effect :O, iam not going to go without he Dither ither. Ima go with some nice AA for this one :D thanks thow

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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #5 on: September 28, 2006, 03:11:52 am
Hehe I was bored and needed something to color :P
Hope you didn't mind. I bet your finals gonna be a whole lot better.

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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #6 on: September 28, 2006, 11:54:05 pm
[IMO]You should make it less Faust and more your own. Keep the head, but repose the body to something less recognizable. Well, to someone who's played Guilty Gear before. Still, no offense, but it seems kind of cheap.[/IMO]

That's not to diss your art, though. It's coming along really well so far.

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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #7 on: September 29, 2006, 02:02:37 pm
I really love the character design, infact i wish i came up with it lol.

Can't wait to see the finished piece :D

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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #8 on: September 30, 2006, 02:04:49 am
So.... i kinda put a hold on the Pose for now ( ill finish it another day )

But, i made myself a Avatar for the forum. I know that the front is flat i know i know, but i like it like that( cant think of any other way to shade it, and dither is " Blah "..... )




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Re: Box Dude :D [WIP]

Reply #9 on: September 30, 2006, 02:09:58 am
If you were to angle the box just slightly, you could add a lot to the portrait, in terms of interest and realism.