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[C+C] Game character

on: April 19, 2016, 06:48:39 pm
hi guys. this is generic wizard (used db32 palette). i need your critique before i will make other characters for the game
« Last Edit: April 19, 2016, 06:51:13 pm by ovle »

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Re: [C+C] Game character

Reply #1 on: April 19, 2016, 07:42:19 pm
I personally think that his hat isn't looking witzard-y.
Also the legs seem a bit thick to me. Also the contrast from beard to the white clothes part may be not enough.
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Re: [C+C] Game character

Reply #2 on: April 23, 2016, 07:39:00 am
thanks for reply, Pusty
only thing i don't get is note about wiz legs, because they are actually under his clothes so its hard to say for me if they are thick or not
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Re: [C+C] Game character

Reply #3 on: April 23, 2016, 08:52:54 am
Quick and dirty edit. I hope this gives some ideas!

« Last Edit: April 23, 2016, 08:55:59 am by tsej »
Correct me if I'm wrong

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Re: [C+C] Game character

Reply #4 on: April 23, 2016, 10:00:18 am
tsej, i like it, thanks) i'm still not sure what style i have to go with, so tryin to quickly make another one character using initial and trying to imitate yours

so the main question for me is - which way to go? or is there any other style i can use? and the secondary is technical issues in chars of the chosen style