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[WIP] girl line art (NSFW)

on: March 30, 2016, 04:42:56 pm
Just looking for another set of eyes to see if anything look wonky.  Used various references sparingly from the internet.
I plan add color and maybe clothes.
Thanks
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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #1 on: March 30, 2016, 04:52:57 pm
The arms look too thin or too short, but otherwise it looks pretty good

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #2 on: March 30, 2016, 07:00:01 pm
The arms look too thin or too short, but otherwise it looks pretty good
Thanks for the reply.  Now the torso looks too short to me, now that you mentioned the arms.

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #3 on: March 31, 2016, 12:34:04 pm
An edit with the original on the left:


EDIT:
Messing with some color:
               
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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #4 on: March 31, 2016, 09:55:22 pm
It still looks kind of odd to me, but I don't know why...

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #5 on: March 31, 2016, 11:29:11 pm
Some thoughts:

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #6 on: April 01, 2016, 03:57:19 am
Great edit Jinn.  Gave me a lot of insight.  My shoulder didn't look right next to yours.  Messed around a bit more...


I've got a bent leg idea.  Can't pull it off just yet.   :huh:

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #7 on: April 01, 2016, 04:35:45 am
Don't have time to edit everything, but here's some more ideas.


Also try adding a little bit of story to it.
And knowing that it is, we seek what it is... ~ Aristotle, Posterior Analytics, Chapter 1

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #8 on: April 01, 2016, 07:29:54 pm
Love the edit PixelPiledriver.  Thanks. The face looks like someone I know...lol  Lovely hair and a perfect pixel butt!  I like what you did with her right hip too.  She's skinny and why didn't I think of that?
As far as a story, I wouldn't know where to start.  Do you mean adding something else?

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Re: [WIP] girl line art

Reply #9 on: April 02, 2016, 03:34:05 am
A bit of a rework...still messing with the feet and legs