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Re: mah character.

Reply #30 on: September 25, 2006, 11:06:23 pm
Quote from: Takai Soyokaze on September 25, 2006, 10:48:05 pm
Is he supposed to be missing the eye? Not sure on that one...

As for the nose, not really, now his face looks blotchy.
under his hair ;) and i'll try to fix the nose
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Re: mah character.

Reply #31 on: September 25, 2006, 11:19:04 pm
The shirt folds look strange.
There's not enough movement to cause that much fold.
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Re: mah character.

Reply #32 on: September 25, 2006, 11:29:46 pm
Quote from: Souly on September 25, 2006, 11:19:04 pm
The shirt folds look strange.
There's not enough movement to cause that much fold.
yeah, i thought it looked wierd. but i don't think i'm going to edit this guy any more
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Re: mah character.

Reply #33 on: September 26, 2006, 12:05:42 am
Wow, this is much improved over the original.
I agree with souly about the shirt-folds, but since you say you're done with the edits, I'll just say you've done a great job improving this and I hope you learned alot from the crits. Keep up the good work.  :y: :y:
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