mah character.

[Helm]

Better already. Don't forget to elongate the far arm.

[Tube]

Next time try some hue-shifts(?) and show the creases in shading, not in the lineart.

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i think i finished it... although i don't like how the body turned out, i don't do too well with folds. but i'm getting better at least.

[Takai Soyokaze]

1. Fixed the black outlines, and touched up some minor details.

2. Ignore the nose, I just was testing what it would look like and it turned out good.

[1up]

1. Fixed the black outlines, and touched up some minor details.

2. Ignore the nose, I just was testing what it would look like and it turned out good.

the nose is already there. i use a line of shading to show it.... your edit kind of ruins it..

[Takai Soyokaze]

The small highlight line does not show the nose well, even if it is anime style. You could use a highlight instead of a shadow, but maybe try showing the top of the bridge of the nose if you want a nose in the picture. I thought you had overlooked it on purpose, so sorry for clashing with your creativity, but do like I said, ignore the nose I did, I was just giving you something to think about.

[1up]

The small highlight line does not show the nose well, even if it is anime style. You could use a highlight instead of a shadow, but maybe try showing the top of the bridge of the nose if you want a nose in the picture. I thought you had overlooked it on purpose, so sorry for clashing with your creativity, but do like I said, ignore the nose I did, I was just giving you something to think about.

there is a higlight on there.... i should probably lighten it... but yeah, i'll try to add some more shadow to it

[Takai Soyokaze]

Yeah, a bit more contrast would help, but the highlight itself don't... how do I put it, it just doesn't say "nose".

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Yeah, a bit more contrast would help, but the highlight itself don't... how do I put it, it just doesn't say "nose".

better?

[Takai Soyokaze]

Is he supposed to be missing the eye? Not sure on that one...

As for the nose, not really, now his face looks blotchy.