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Idk what you call it.

on: February 29, 2016, 11:25:12 pm
I thought I'd just post some random sprites i've been working on recently. I hope to complete them all soon but for some reason my mind just drifts off into a new sprite sadly.

C+C would be appreciated

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Re: Idk what you call it.

Reply #1 on: March 01, 2016, 12:03:31 am
The girls stomach looks nothing like your reference, Some stronger contrast would be good, the birdman is incomplete. Try texturing his head to look like feathers, and work on his sword. Also it seems you had good contrast before you added colors to him, then kind of ruined the perspective with choice of colors in shading. that's just what I see though.

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Re: Idk what you call it.

Reply #2 on: March 01, 2016, 12:15:31 am
The girls stomach looks nothing like your reference, Some stronger contrast would be good, the birdman is incomplete. Try texturing his head to look like feathers, and work on his sword. Also it seems you had good contrast before you added colors to him, then kind of ruined the perspective with choice of colors in shading. that's just what I see though.
Yeah, I wasn't using the photo for reference, I was just using it for colors. About the birdman, you know of any good sprites that I can get reference for a feather texture?

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Re: Idk what you call it.

Reply #3 on: March 01, 2016, 02:55:34 am
Just google "Raven Sprite" and tons of references will come up.
I found this one, which looked pretty good to me

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Re: Idk what you call it.

Reply #4 on: March 01, 2016, 06:08:08 am
Just google "Raven Sprite" and tons of references will come up.
I found this one, which looked pretty good to me

Ok I tried making feather texture and this is what I got

how is it?