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Offline Lavapatrol

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Fox Practice

on: February 27, 2016, 05:50:26 pm
I've been practicing pixel art for a few hours, learning hue shifting and such, and I wanted some feedback on this little fox I created.

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Offline odedrt9

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Re: Fox Practice

Reply #1 on: February 27, 2016, 06:46:22 pm
I highly suggest you read these two threads:

how to shade fur?
fox - render fur or keep it simple?

These are basically the questions you have.
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Re: Fox Practice

Reply #2 on: February 27, 2016, 07:21:12 pm
I fixed the fox, changed some of the palettes, and removed the outline (Because I like sprites without outlines better anyway). Does the fur look any better now?

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Re: Fox Practice

Reply #3 on: February 28, 2016, 04:24:52 pm
I like the look of your fur but the anatomy doesn't look right to me. Also the forelegs look weird because of that.
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Re: Fox Practice

Reply #4 on: February 28, 2016, 09:57:19 pm
The body is way too square..
Also the jaw and chest blends together, you need to shade it so it's separated.
I also think it needs bigger ears.
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