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Re: Eleflight

Reply #10 on: September 23, 2006, 11:55:20 pm
personally, he looks a bit too chubby to have his ribs showing. I think if you get rid of them altogether it will look better

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Re: Eleflight

Reply #11 on: September 24, 2006, 12:33:42 pm
Amazing crit by Ptoing. That was exactly what I was thinking of but was not able to describe. Especially the part where the trunk meets ... hm, trunk :) Maybe you should move the end of it a bit to the right.

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Re: Eleflight

Reply #12 on: September 24, 2006, 01:19:43 pm
Sorry, guys. Just checking in quick to say I won't be around for a few days, so I might not respond to crits right away. Keep 'em coming, though! This is all prime stuff. Thanksthanks, everybody.  ;D

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Re: Eleflight

Reply #13 on: September 26, 2006, 07:55:38 pm
Wauw, i just love your style.
And iff i may say: i hope in the future to be having the same kind of style as you do.
how long do you pixel?

alright, enough with the sucking up, about the piece.
Its really nice in my eyes, the elephant may use a bit more contrast, the same as the guy.
And the white streams is a bit overdone, it could be a bit less.

For the rest, much respect!