AuthorTopic: [CC] P.2 Gravity Falls : Mabel's dance.  (Read 6651 times)

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[CC] P.2 Gravity Falls : Mabel's dance.

on: January 26, 2016, 09:06:22 pm
Hey Pixelation,
first pixel post here, I feel nervous :P

Here is a quick sum up of my latest pixels, I guess it's the best way to introduce my little self.

Spark of time


Darksoul, Beat'em all demake


Inarii torii


Chrono trigger tribute


Loop de loop : LOL (using pico8 palette)


Metroid mokup


Birthday card for my son



TMNT : pixel reboot


Some character design


Any C&C would be highly appreciated, so help yourself and feel free to drop a critic !
Thanks and have an A 1 day !

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Re: Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and more

Reply #1 on: January 26, 2016, 09:35:35 pm
With the metroid mock up, her pose looks really off. She looks like she might fall over because she is kindof leaning back and doesnt have a very powerful stance. Everything else looks really cool though :y:

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Re: Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and more

Reply #2 on: January 26, 2016, 09:49:40 pm
Dope stuff!  :y: :)
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Re: Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and more

Reply #3 on: January 26, 2016, 10:20:16 pm
Don't know what to say lol looks amazing!
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Re: Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and more

Reply #4 on: January 27, 2016, 09:30:42 am
DracoDragon42> You're damn right, the posing lack of stance. I'was trying to keep a girly shape, but I've lost the strength of a power armor.

PixelPiledriver> Thanks =)

Pusty> Yet, it's nice of you taking the time to drop me those few words.

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Re: [CC] Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and such

Reply #5 on: January 27, 2016, 10:06:16 am
The Torii piece is my favorite pixel art piece of 2015. I  saw you "Spark of time" two days ago on reddit, didn't know it was you. Great work, you're the kind of pixel artist I want to become.
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Re: [CC] Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and such

Reply #6 on: January 27, 2016, 01:11:40 pm
Welcome! Been loving your animations a while now :-*

If I had one larger overarching crit it would be that your work all looks great on a macro scale but on a pixel scale its a bit blobby. It'd be great to see you go into a little more detail and take a little more care in your textures and stuff, it would really push you to another level. The plantlife in most of them and the rock textures in the darksouls piece are what I'm talking about, sort of pillow shaded in that the light tones are always islands in the centre of the mid tones, that sort of thing. The TMNT one is a step in the right direction.

Anyway looking forward to critiquing anything new you post here :y:

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Re: [CC] Pixel Bushido : Animation, mokup and such

Reply #7 on: January 28, 2016, 04:42:56 pm
washk>Wow really ?  thanks, I feel honoured !

32> Thanks for this critic, much appreciated. I guess you're right regarding the texturing work : I've been focusing on color, animation and lately struggling with the right amount of AA. I've surely neglected the pixel touch and details, they are hard to animate and I'm trying to avoid realistic render.
I'm gonna do my best to level up on my next piece  !

Speaking of,
Last year I've done a pixel greeting cards, it was one of my first "real" pixelart piece (sooo many mistakes on it... )

So, I've got only 3 day to complete this year card, here is the WIP !



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Re: [CC][WIP] Pixel Bushido : 2016 Greeting card in progress

Reply #8 on: January 28, 2016, 06:30:53 pm
Really great stuff, very professional and obviously speaks for itself in terms of technique and detail.

It's great to have you here, would love to see your opinions on the pieces of those of us who are newbies to the craft.

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Re: [CC][WIP] Pixel Bushido : 2016 Greeting card in progress

Reply #9 on: January 29, 2016, 12:44:55 pm
Transilience> Thanks, I'll do my best to help the pixel folks =)

Here is another step !