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Offline Peyton

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[CC][WIP] Another untitled.

on: November 23, 2015, 12:38:36 am


This is what I have so far. Crits, etc.?

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Re: [CC][WIP] Another untitled.

Reply #1 on: November 23, 2015, 12:50:21 am
It looks like it will be great when it is finished. A couple things that I would watch out for as your completing it are:
Get rid of the couple random black dots in places.
I can't tell if the persons shadow is going to be from the torch or from the sun. If the torch, then the day is way too bright to produce that shadow. If it will come from the sun, then I would suggest not having as dark of a shade, and the angle makes me want to say that the sun should be visible in the horizon.
Good luck.

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Re: [CC][WIP] Another untitled.

Reply #2 on: November 23, 2015, 03:21:47 am
it raises the question why is he holding a torch in the middle of the day?
it also looks more like a staff that happens to have a fire on it than a torchlight.

compositionally I feel like the tree in the right interrupts the character's line of sight. perhaps there could be just a few low bushes amd plants there or something to keep horizon line free.

also the trees on left don't seem to carry enough weight.
maybe if one was a little closer so it was down more, left a little and thicker.