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[C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

on: October 26, 2015, 11:14:12 pm

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Re: [C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

Reply #1 on: October 27, 2015, 12:26:59 am
I think it looks a bit pillow shaded (that's not good), I hope it helps :D
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Re: [C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

Reply #2 on: October 27, 2015, 02:00:27 am
It doesn't look too pillow shaded to me, but there are some anatomy issues, as well as a lot of jagged lines. First thing I would do is clean up the jagged lines/ bumps coming out from the outline and in between colors. His head is too small and his right bicep is a lot shorter than his left. His hands are also too small relative to his height.

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Re: [C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

Reply #3 on: October 27, 2015, 04:57:06 pm
To be honest I don't know exactly what u mean by saying jagged lines on sprite.
Here's small update, changed head, hands, random spots, shading:

(I don't know how I didnt realize that head is too small, I had to be sleepy finishing it :P)
(Scarf still looks horrible imo :()
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Re: [C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

Reply #4 on: October 27, 2015, 08:55:22 pm


Did a bit of an edit on the scarf and the hilt. I didn't do anything with the shading of the scarf, so it might not make sense anymore.
The jagged line thing might become more apparent if you compare the two. The scarf in the edit "flows" better for lack of a better term.

Also:

-Why does the scarf have an outline while the rest doesn't?

-The ribcage is very short.
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Re: [C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

Reply #5 on: October 29, 2015, 10:24:49 pm
Ok here's the update:

Changed alot of things, mainly scarf and face.
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Re: [C+C] Speed Of Sound Sonic

Reply #6 on: November 05, 2015, 01:43:08 am
One thing i wanna say if i may, irrelevant as it is to the current sprite, your process could use some fixing.  When you start with a skeleton almost for fun i notice that you deal with the issues related to proportion and whatnot later rather than during the skeleton phase as you should.  I can undrestand its a bit tough to imagine the body without and features and try to find mistakes but otherwise the more detail you add the harder it will become to fix anatomical issues as well as proportional issues. 

Onto the actual drawing.  The scarf looks pretty good but its not cohesive with his clothes.  The clothes are shaded with 2 colours whereas the scarf is shaded with 3 or 4 colours (although that detail isnt really important i thought it was necessary) 

Ribcage is still pretty small and you have a bit of a tangent between the belly button line and the lines in the bands around his stomac (just look up what a tangent is ((its when things line up weird)))

I dotn understant why everythign else is painted kinda whereas the face is drawn with black outlines, it looks kinda silly. 

Scarfs better but meh.  theres something off about it, look to a real scarf for reference. 
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