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FallenMoons
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[WIP] Suggested Improvements?
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October 20, 2015, 02:47:56 am
What improvements can I make? Suggestions on color palette? Also, if you could explain why you did what you did that would be very helpful. Thanks! (Be gentle)
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Pusty
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Re: [WIP] Suggested Improvements?
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October 20, 2015, 04:01:22 am
I think it is not readable enough. I looked at it 10 seconds and after that I realised what I was seeing (or rather what perspective this is) Well If this are game tiles it's not that important.
Maybe making a higher contrast between floor and walls would help? (Except you would like to stick to this bluish color,then I think it's fine)
My comment is kinda a unnecessary haha
I hope it helps anyways
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Cherno
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Re: [WIP] Suggested Improvements?
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October 20, 2015, 09:24:33 am
Shadows would be fine.
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Linaru
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Re: [WIP] Suggested Improvements?
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October 20, 2015, 12:06:46 pm
I made a few subtle changes:
gave the lower corners an darker edge.
added a darker shade between the large floor tiles to break them up a bit.
used one of the lighter colours for the bricks and highlighted and shaded them, quick and dirty.
added a darker colour to the 'top' of the walls.
tweaked the bottom row of bricks to add depth.
overall only added two new shades to the palette that I used sparingly.
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FallenMoons
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Re: [WIP] Suggested Improvements?
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October 21, 2015, 04:01:24 am
Wow! This looks fantastic! Thank you!
I will take your additions to heart, they make a lot of sense and will use them! Also, I've never been the best with colors so adding those colors what probably for the best!
Thanks again!
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CelioHogane
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Re: [WIP] Suggested Improvements?
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October 21, 2015, 08:47:05 pm
Depending on how you want this to look, What size you want? x1? Bigger?
Because in x1 it gets really blurry and noisy, even more compared to the BIG bricks.
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