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[WIP] My one of first works.

on: October 04, 2015, 12:58:37 pm
Did it looks nice or not?
What I must upgrade or change here?
« Last Edit: October 04, 2015, 01:07:54 pm by Maligo »
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #1 on: October 04, 2015, 01:05:23 pm
First, the image is a .jpg, which is not a good format to save pixel art in. Second, you don't need to upscale the art before posting. Especially not 20x.

As far as the art itself goes, there is no clear light source, and this makes the bottom part unreadable.
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #2 on: October 04, 2015, 01:08:53 pm
First, the image is a .jpg, which is not a good format to save pixel art in. Second, you don't need to upscale the art before posting. Especially not 20x.

As far as the art itself goes, there is no clear light source, and this makes the bottom part unreadable.
Already uploaded x1 :)
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #3 on: October 04, 2015, 01:23:20 pm
First, the image is a .jpg, which is not a good format to save pixel art in. Second, you don't need to upscale the art before posting. Especially not 20x.

As far as the art itself goes, there is no clear light source, and this makes the bottom part unreadable.
Okay, Ill try to add deep shades.
Shall I add another color or the better way is do it with 3?
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #4 on: October 05, 2015, 03:47:08 pm
First, the image is a .jpg, which is not a good format to save pixel art in. Second, you don't need to upscale the art before posting. Especially not 20x.

As far as the art itself goes, there is no clear light source, and this makes the bottom part unreadable.

Looks strange..
Or not?
*the bottom right is unstarted*
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #5 on: October 05, 2015, 03:51:24 pm
I don't see any image at all.

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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #6 on: October 05, 2015, 04:15:09 pm
I don't see any image at all.
Ill try another url
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #7 on: October 05, 2015, 04:19:42 pm
I don't see any image at all.
So here the original version
And updated version
P.S. Sry for .jpg, just cant fing .png saver..
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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #8 on: October 05, 2015, 04:39:32 pm
Even if someone before told you that .jpeg is not good for pixel art cause it adds distortions and unnecessary colors you are still saving your drawing as .jpeg  ???

Your new version have so much necessary dithering that you can't even tell what's on the image. Dithering don't help much on small resolutions especially when you have high contrast between colors you try to blend and when you use this many dithering. Also avoid using pure black.

If I were you I would scrap this drawing, plan out design and colors and start fresh. Think about it as part of learning process, and don't get too attached to your drawings.

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Re: [WIP] My one of first works.

Reply #9 on: October 06, 2015, 12:17:25 am
Even if someone before told you that .jpeg is not good for pixel art cause it adds distortions and unnecessary colors you are still saving your drawing as .jpeg  ???

Your new version have so much necessary dithering that you can't even tell what's on the image. Dithering don't help much on small resolutions especially when you have high contrast between colors you try to blend and when you use this many dithering. Also avoid using pure black.

If I were you I would scrap this drawing, plan out design and colors and start fresh. Think about it as part of learning process, and don't get too attached to your drawings.
Okay, thank you for your feedback :)
I have my first version.. there I can add additional colors and make this picture with some dithering :)
P.S. Im NOT using .jpg!! Site, where I have uploaded this picture for a time has converted it from .png to .jpg
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