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Offline Daaniz

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Any tips or criticism is welcome!

on: October 04, 2015, 02:15:31 am

http://imgur.com/a/xJXH7
I feel like the swoosh effects, like when the spear is thrown or dashed forward with looks weird and I don't really know how to make them look better. Help please!!
« Last Edit: October 04, 2015, 02:07:28 pm by Daaniz »

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Re: Any tips or criticism is welcome!

Reply #1 on: October 04, 2015, 03:50:55 am
I'm no mod, but you have these same requests/animations on multiple threads. There's no need for that. It would be better to ask for help on one and delete or remove the others, as it clutters the forums and makes other posters requests/threads less visible. If someone is interested or has the time, they will post when they feel necessary.
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Re: Any tips or criticism is welcome!

Reply #2 on: October 04, 2015, 08:18:37 am
Also to add the image, copy the image link directly with the extension like I mentioned in one of your other threads

Where it says "Copy Image URL"

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Re: Any tips or criticism is welcome!

Reply #3 on: October 04, 2015, 02:08:11 pm
I'm no mod, but you have these same requests/animations on multiple threads. There's no need for that. It would be better to ask for help on one and delete or remove the others, as it clutters the forums and makes other posters requests/threads less visible. If someone is interested or has the time, they will post when they feel necessary.

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Re: Any tips or criticism is welcome!

Reply #4 on: October 04, 2015, 02:10:22 pm
If you want to proceed with the other thread, I either can merge them
Or you just post in the other thread and I delete this one.
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Re: Any tips or criticism is welcome!

Reply #5 on: October 04, 2015, 02:12:36 pm
If you want to proceed with the other thread, I either can merge them
Or you just post in the other thread and I delete this one.

Umm could we try merging them?

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Re: Any tips or criticism is welcome!

Reply #6 on: October 05, 2015, 10:53:38 am
I think the white trails all over the thrown spear are too over the tiop. I do like all the overall animations very much though.

Something about the third animation looks off to me. Maybe you can add a pause on the upward swipe just like you have for the downward swipe. One more frame of animation with the sword swipe dissipating.