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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #10 on: November 16, 2015, 08:37:17 pm
The biggest reason that Decroded's moon works better than yours is that it blends into the sky. Its darkest colour is the background colour of the sky, and its shape is partly implied rather than explicitly shown. Your moon "sits" on the sky.

Otherwise, this looks very good. I suggest breaking up the symmetry a bit more. Especially the light the bonfire casts at the bottom and maybe the lighter mountains.
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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #11 on: November 17, 2015, 09:55:56 am
The biggest reason that Decroded's moon works better than yours is that it blends into the sky. Its darkest colour is the background colour of the sky, and its shape is partly implied rather than explicitly shown. Your moon "sits" on the sky.

Otherwise, this looks very good. I suggest breaking up the symmetry a bit more. Especially the light the bonfire casts at the bottom and maybe the lighter mountains.
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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #12 on: November 17, 2015, 03:20:53 pm
With the moon now having a definite light source from the side rather than "from the front and maybe just unevenly coloured", I guess it's time to point out a physics derp: If the moon is lit from above the horizon, that means the sun is above the horizon, which in turn means it's day time xP Maybe you could v-flip the moon to make the light be coming from below, to avoid redrawing it?

Your large transition cluster worked well for the low-contrast moon, possibly-front-lit, but it doesn't look quite right with this lighting. The moon has no atmosphere and its surface texture is relatively flat compared to its size, so the light-dark transition is quite quirk, with only some craters to make it softer. Decroded's example has the transition done quite well, while even keeping some dark-side detail (the main problem with it was that the shape of the transition made the Moon look flat compared to yours). I think your super-blue transition cluster should be darkened, and a narrower blue band should be added between it and the lit part. The craters on the lit side should have lower contrast, probably.
A smaller but gentler transition would solve the other problem created by your colour change: the moon is now the most contrasting thing in the image, and completely distracts from the rest of it.

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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #13 on: November 22, 2015, 10:42:47 pm
With the moon now having a definite light source from the side rather than "from the front and maybe just unevenly coloured", I guess it's time to point out a physics derp: If the moon is lit from above the horizon, that means the sun is above the horizon, which in turn means it's day time xP Maybe you could v-flip the moon to make the light be coming from below, to avoid redrawing it?

Your large transition cluster worked well for the low-contrast moon, possibly-front-lit, but it doesn't look quite right with this lighting. The moon has no atmosphere and its surface texture is relatively flat compared to its size, so the light-dark transition is quite quirk, with only some craters to make it softer. Decroded's example has the transition done quite well, while even keeping some dark-side detail (the main problem with it was that the shape of the transition made the Moon look flat compared to yours). I think your super-blue transition cluster should be darkened, and a narrower blue band should be added between it and the lit part. The craters on the lit side should have lower contrast, probably.
A smaller but gentler transition would solve the other problem created by your colour change: the moon is now the most contrasting thing in the image, and completely distracts from the rest of it.
Wow! Thanks a lot eishiya. What a beautiful tips! I'll keep it in mind next time.

Hey! Thanks everyone for your help <3
I haven’t had much time to finish it so I think it's better to stop now, choose the best version and move on to the next pieces :)

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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #14 on: November 22, 2015, 11:28:11 pm
I agree with your choice. The thing I wish you'd kept from the newest edit is the ground texture (but not the colours) around the fire.

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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #15 on: November 25, 2015, 07:01:10 am
just stumbled randomly upon this on pj. i thought the similarity is striking

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/99443.htm

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Re: [C+C] Album Cover

Reply #16 on: November 25, 2015, 09:26:44 am
Haha, awesome. I like Arcade Hero's composition better with the water towards the horizon.