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Offline AlexHW

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Re: new horizons WIP

Reply #10 on: September 05, 2005, 04:46:22 am
do they look more strained? (very unfinished, but you can see where it is going)

Yeah, I like how it is developing..
Also to note, the left edges of the 2 middle sails (the backwards C shape creating the left edge of the sails) are showing their thickness to the viewer, and by shadeing the edge like you have it, it gives the impression that those edges are smooth and receding towards the background. You might want to consider experimenting with a crisper edge here to express the thinness of it (to not create a shaded transition between these 2 specific edges and the interior of the sails is basically what I mean).