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[WIP][C&C] The Last Alchemist Artwork.

on: August 25, 2015, 02:26:33 am
Decided to make this thread a general C&C for all of the artwork for a game I am working on.

Character concept/design: http://wayofthepixel.net/index.php?action=profile;u=47680
Animator: Me

We would love to hear your thoughts and opinions!

Main Character:


Ira:



Odio:



Timore:


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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #1 on: August 27, 2015, 02:22:25 am
You'd want it to extend farther back and definitely suggest more side hair. A bad toupe is obvious, but not small like that, it resembles a cap somewhat.
Perhaps to emphasize its looseness you could make the toupe itself floppy, rather than a single strand.

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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #2 on: August 27, 2015, 03:05:44 am
You'd want it to extend farther back and definitely suggest more side hair. A bad toupe is obvious, but not small like that, it resembles a cap somewhat.
Perhaps to emphasize its looseness you could make the toupe itself floppy, rather than a single strand.

I've been working with another artist (http://wayofthepixel.net/index.php?action=profile;u=47680), who has revitalized the artwork, let me know what you think!



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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #3 on: August 27, 2015, 03:45:05 am
That looks good, but also like a full, healthy head of hair. Maybe:



But I also wonder what a young person is doing with a toupe.

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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #4 on: August 27, 2015, 03:58:44 am
That looks good, but also like a full, healthy head of hair. Maybe:



But I also wonder what a young person is doing with a toupe.

I killed the toupe idea. It was just something funny I tried but the more I thought about it, the less if fit for the game.
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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #5 on: August 29, 2015, 05:51:06 pm


I can't decide if I want feet, or no feet on the ice state for the main character, thoughts?

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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #6 on: August 30, 2015, 12:19:11 am


Tried it with legs.

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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #7 on: September 01, 2015, 07:34:53 pm
Well in my opinion the floating legs rayman style were more fun.

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Re: [WIP][C&C] Main Char 4 Action/Puzzle Platformer

Reply #8 on: September 01, 2015, 07:41:53 pm
I'm trying to animate the running sequence now, and it just looks weird with the legs. Once I am done I may increase the foot size and do it a la Rayman.

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Re: [WIP][C&C] The Last Alchemist Artwork.

Reply #9 on: September 13, 2015, 03:32:31 am
Odio and Ira bosses:

Ira:


Odio + Idle:


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