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Re: [C+C] [WIP] Baddie for game critique thread. Thoughts?

Reply #20 on: August 22, 2015, 04:45:20 am
I would focus on visual priority, the back half should be the darker shade so we can get a sense of depth, right now it's got a mostly flat papery feel. Push your values a little more. I'll try for an edit tomorrow.

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Re: [C+C] [WIP] Baddie for game critique thread. Thoughts?

Reply #21 on: August 24, 2015, 12:02:45 am
   

In addition to what I said, try to make strong poses, make your characters more individual or dynamic.

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Re: [C+C] [WIP] Baddie for game critique thread. Thoughts?

Reply #22 on: August 24, 2015, 12:13:03 am
   

In addition to what I said, try to make strong poses, make your characters more individual or dynamic.

Wow. I love what you did with the sprite, though I think the wrist may be bent a tad too much on the right. It looks broken.