[C+C] [WIP] Baddie for game critique thread. Thoughts?

[Joe]

I would focus on visual priority, the back half should be the darker shade so we can get a sense of depth, right now it's got a mostly flat papery feel. Push your values a little more. I'll try for an edit tomorrow.

[Joe]

   

In addition to what I said, try to make strong poses, make your characters more individual or dynamic.

[RedSuinit]

   

In addition to what I said, try to make strong poses, make your characters more individual or dynamic.

Wow. I love what you did with the sprite, though I think the wrist may be bent a tad too much on the right. It looks broken.