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Offline Dnilb

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[C+C] Dnlib sprites

on: August 14, 2015, 10:36:12 pm
Tried to remake some of my old concepts, didn't come out as I wanted to because the sprite is smaller and its harder to include details.
So how are the proportions, details, etc. How can I improve this sprite? (I think hands are too long and palms are awkward)

Extras:
Gif of making:

Old Concepts:
« Last Edit: August 14, 2015, 11:01:16 pm by Dnilb »

Offline IrresponsibleFreelancer

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Re: [C+C] Degnah

Reply #1 on: August 14, 2015, 10:43:34 pm
Dude.  Do one thing at a time.  Finish it then move on.  Its less of a hassle for all of us yourself included.  :yell:

Either that or put them all in the same topic so youre not stealing other peoples spotlight when it comes to crits.
« Last Edit: August 14, 2015, 10:45:35 pm by IrresponsibleFreelancer »
I dont get it done, but when i do its not done.

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Re: [C+C] Degnah

Reply #2 on: August 14, 2015, 10:55:30 pm
Sorry, I thought I was supposed to do 1 topic per sprite :P

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Re: [C+C] Degnah

Reply #3 on: August 14, 2015, 10:58:50 pm
I guess IrresponsibleFreelancer is right lol

Well I think that remade is good although I don't really get the concept.
The bandage(?) on the right at his head looks kinda weird to me.
And I'm not too sure what kind of trousers that are
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Re: [C+C] Dnlib sprites

Reply #4 on: August 15, 2015, 01:58:17 am
Sorry on my part that sounded a bit rude. I really am surprised though your art get better and better every time. Onto the crit of this one.

The clothes once again use a few to many colours (at least more than necessary) the pants make sense enough and they hang well. The anatomy has some slight issues that could use adjusting. The bandages are a bit awkward.

I'll do a more indepth crit late along with an edit but right now I'm on my phone so I can't.
I dont get it done, but when i do its not done.

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Re: [C+C] Degnah

Reply #5 on: August 15, 2015, 06:02:31 am
Sorry, I thought I was supposed to do 1 topic per sprite :P
You generally get better feedback splitting it up into separate threads but if u do too many at once then what happens is u haven't had a chance to progress since ur last one.
so u end up with double-up crits of the same issue and it just wastes ppl's time.
perhaps if there's a few similar sprites for the same project, put them all in a row against a 50% grey background and spaces accordingly (turn on the grid in ur software) then ur likely to get good feedback on how to improve more than one at a time.

Example:
http://wayofthepixel.net/index.php?topic=18272.0