AuthorTopic: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk  (Read 9182 times)

Offline Kich

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 43
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

on: August 09, 2015, 10:15:43 pm
Hey everyone,

I'm having trouble with perspective. How do I make good tree trunks in 3/4 top-view? Look:



I don't think the tree I made have a trunk like this, but zelda had big ones that actually show just roots:

« Last Edit: August 10, 2015, 12:31:12 am by Lucas Kich »

Offline Kich

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 43
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #1 on: August 11, 2015, 12:03:13 am

Failing a lot. :/ Perspective on the trunk doesn't seem right.
« Last Edit: August 11, 2015, 12:05:05 am by Lucas Kich »

Offline pistachio

  • 0011
  • **
  • Posts: 639
  • Karma: +4/-0
  • Mostly lurking
    • http://pixeljoint.com/p/125138.htm
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #2 on: August 11, 2015, 12:08:05 am
Canopy looks good, maybe its left (our right) side is tilted up more than the left side is, and that asymmetry of the leaves makes it look windswept to the left. (Animated?!)

To do the trunk's perspective, which is flatter ATM, drag that middle part down and make it more circular/U shape.
« Last Edit: August 11, 2015, 12:10:18 am by pistachio »

Offline Pusty

  • 0010
  • *
  • Posts: 246
  • Karma: +0/-0
  • I like cheese
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #3 on: August 11, 2015, 12:09:52 am
I think the trunk looks alright but that's most likely just me

But anyways just wanted to say that I really like those leaves o:
Just a random hobby gamedev passing by O:
[Ludum Dare][Itch.io]

Offline Decroded

  • 0100
  • ***
  • Posts: 1285
  • Karma: +3/-0
  • Oh hai
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #4 on: August 11, 2015, 01:03:22 am
as pistachio mentioned, stretch the centre roots further downwards to emphasize the elipse.

This exact thing seems to bother lots of ppl but its a real simple fix once u know that a flat base gives off a cardboard cut-out effect.

also I feel like a canopy that size deserves chunkier roots to support it.

Offline Kich

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 43
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #5 on: August 15, 2015, 08:43:28 pm
Thanks a lot for the tips!

I think it's looking better now,

>
« Last Edit: August 16, 2015, 05:22:37 am by Lucas Kich »

Offline Kich

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 43
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #6 on: August 20, 2015, 07:08:10 am
Some improvements

Offline Gil

  • 0100
  • ***
  • Posts: 1543
  • Karma: +1/-0
  • Too square to be hip
    • http://pixeljoint.com/p/475.htm
    • View Profile
    • My Portfolio

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #7 on: August 20, 2015, 02:15:36 pm
I like it less with all the grass obscuring the trunk, but I do like the grass. Maybe have some trunk sticking out of the grass?

Offline Kich

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 43
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #8 on: August 20, 2015, 08:14:48 pm

Offline Decroded

  • 0100
  • ***
  • Posts: 1285
  • Karma: +3/-0
  • Oh hai
    • View Profile

Re: Perspective? 3/4 top-view tree trunk

Reply #9 on: August 21, 2015, 05:41:28 am
Maybe have some trunk sticking out of the grass?
^ I love doing this. the tree trunk goes into the dirt then pops back out for a bit then back into the ground again.
it looks cool.
u can also make shadows and highlights on the grass that imply the root is just under the surface...