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[C+C] Ceafan

on: August 06, 2015, 12:48:23 am
You guys told me to try something smaller:

Imo something feels odd about this sprite and I don't quite know what.

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Re: [C+C] Ceafan

Reply #1 on: August 06, 2015, 01:00:51 am
I really like the face of this one
But the left foot looks a bit odd
And I think the whole picture would need some anti-aliasing.

I may be wrong of course
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Re: [C+C] Ceafan

Reply #2 on: August 06, 2015, 01:53:38 am
It's smaller but still big. Go with under 100px high canvas and you will see the difference.

But regarding this one, proportions are off, upper part of body is much longer than it should be, head is a bit big, and belt is too low which causes additional problems.

I would suggest that you block out basic shapes with bigger brush and don't think about small details until you define base right. It will be much better and it would save you time cause it's easier to erase or modify something that you spend only half minute on drawing than redraw part that took you hour or more to define.

Quick edit. :)

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Re: [C+C] Ceafan

Reply #3 on: August 06, 2015, 09:53:59 am
Yeah now I see what seemed odd to me.
Position of belt, shape of shoulders and the way hands are placed.
Here's update:

Kinda pointless because it looks like I just copied what you did.
Gonna try to draw something else today.
And as for smaller sprites, I have one in the thread [C+C] Knight+Havik but noone seems intrested

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Re: [C+C] Ceafan

Reply #4 on: August 06, 2015, 11:25:02 am
Well this is off the topic but your small images look fine to me. Maybe a bit more contrast but I don't know what to change else ways ^^
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