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[C&C][WIP] Explosion, Man with guitar

on: July 28, 2015, 01:37:40 am


Spent the past couple of days in my free time making something a bit odd. Either way, I'd love to get some feedback.

It's largely unfinished, and its always better to get feedback earlier. Ignore the few different attempts at dithering in some places (the bottom, mostly), I'm just trying stuff out. Colors still need reworking, IMO.

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Re: [C&C][WIP] Explosion, Man with guitar

Reply #1 on: July 28, 2015, 10:47:02 am
i dont really get the pose. why is he hugging the guitar and sat down? wouldnt it look cooler if he were playing it? Otherwise this looks great, love the colours.
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Re: [C&C][WIP] Explosion, Man with guitar

Reply #2 on: July 28, 2015, 06:45:04 pm
I really like that he's hugging the guitar. There seems to be a lot of chaos around him, and yet, he seems content, attached to something he clearly loves.

If I was to nit pick, it be that the foreground transitions too quickly into the background, that could be due to the limited pallet and because this is still earlish as a WIP,  I'd probably break it up a bit though. I do like the comic book look this has  :y: