[C + C] My Trees

[QueenC]

Hey, I'm helping to make art for an indie game in development and wanted some c+c on the trees I made for it. Please and thanks : )

[TheRealAkito]

I really love the design of those trees. They're gorgeous and give off this nostalgic Pokemon diamond feel to me.. The only thing that is bothering me is the grass on the stump, its making the stump look like you erased a part off of it because its the same color as the grass, and make the stump a little wider on the first set of trees.

[Glak]

The grass poking up looks like it is glowing.  Despite being in shadow, you gave it the color of the grass in the sun.

The perspective on the top tree's foliage does not match its trunk, nor the other tree.

[Decroded]

echo above comments.
regarding perspective, add more angle to trunk and much more angle to the shadow ellipse.

grass near trunk cant be brighter than surrounding grass and u don't need outlines on grass against trunk.

u also dont need outlines under top clumps of bottom row of trees for example.

[Daimoth]

I'd use your hard outlines more diplomatically. You've got all this separation everywhere, which could be appropriate depending on how they look when "slotted in", but maybe not.

[QueenC]

Thanks for the replies : )

Made some changes to the fat tree.