AuthorTopic: [C+C]Harley Quinn's head(Updated)  (Read 2895 times)

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[C+C]Harley Quinn's head(Updated)

on: May 19, 2015, 03:39:00 am
Hello,

Some pixels are reused from the joker.
Like a evil.



Updated:
« Last Edit: May 23, 2015, 05:39:45 pm by coin_hunter »

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Re: [C+C]Harley Quinn's head

Reply #1 on: May 19, 2015, 08:45:01 am
please don't upscale ur art this forum has built in scaling feature so please repost at 1:1.

I'm seeing banding in ur shading.
try avoid pure grey ramps, offset with some subtle hues.
hair needs more saturation.
u don't need to saturate all colours in the ramp but the mid-dark colours could use more.
try shading the hair with clusters and highlights instead of resorting to literal lines.
u only need to suggest a few lines to give the impression of hair.

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Re: [C+C]Harley Quinn's head

Reply #2 on: May 19, 2015, 10:50:10 am
please don't upscale ur art this forum has built in scaling feature so please repost at 1:1.

I'm seeing banding in ur shading.
try avoid pure grey ramps, offset with some subtle hues.
hair needs more saturation.
u don't need to saturate all colours in the ramp but the mid-dark colours could use more.
try shading the hair with clusters and highlights instead of resorting to literal lines.
u only need to suggest a few lines to give the impression of hair.

many thanks for your comments
I replaced the upscaled picture with original one.
And I will try to make some modifications according your suggestion ;D

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Re: [C+C]Harley Quinn's head

Reply #3 on: May 19, 2015, 06:52:03 pm
I remember seeing your joker piece, but seeing this makes me instantly think joker in a wig, so I think you need to adjust the face some more to like more like harley.  To Repeat what decroded said I think you should simplify it a little, its coming off too messy.

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Re: [C+C]Harley Quinn's head

Reply #4 on: May 23, 2015, 05:19:50 pm
I remember seeing your joker piece, but seeing this makes me instantly think joker in a wig, so I think you need to adjust the face some more to like more like harley.  To Repeat what decroded said I think you should simplify it a little, its coming off too messy.
Exactly joker in a wig!
I think the eyes make it like joker as the face and the lip have been adjusted to differ with joker.
The updated picture has been posted.
I simplify the hair and repaint the face.
How about this one?
« Last Edit: May 24, 2015, 12:25:21 am by coin_hunter »