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[Lyuf]

Here is my new work. 100x100 pixels and 5 colors. I drew it for my avatar.
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Small edit.

[sharprm]

The cloth looks very nice. Well done. Fingers could be clearer. edit: I think the head is too small.

[Blick]

It's looking really cluttered, most noticably in the arm and back of the hand. I'd suggest getting rid of interior black lines unless they're really necessary. The various pieces of the arm could probably be defined just as well with highlights and shadows just as well as using black outlines.

I think his jawline is too angular, and parts of him are dangerously close, or just are, pillowshaded. Like his neck.

[Rydin]

*dies*

100x100 and 5 colors!!!! 
..........that's my format! ......was....



Looks very Trigun-y, besides the fact that he looks like a clown.  Amazingly neat and orderly dithering and excelent shadows.  The white pixels going down the thin parts of the arm kind of stands out at me though, maybe could go with out them....

The neck is bugging me too; there's the exactly vertical line going through it, and then it almost seems pillow-y on the neck itself.

It's a great start, and gets a thumbs up by me, because of the 100x100x5colors.  If you made it for your avatar, why don't you use it for it?


Edit: 6 colors (forgot to count transparency)

[Lyuf]

Thanks for criticism all. It’s very nice that you like it. I have seen the mistakes, but I shall correct it later. Because I begin a new picture.
P.S. I have avatar on this forum and i like it:)

[Rydin]

Much better in my book.

You are a dithering god I hope you know. *drools*

[Skull]

That is aamazing. The palette looks great and the dithering is really well used.

[Tremulant]

I hope you don't mind edits. I did a quick one on the face/head:


The jaw was too angular, and the head did look a bit small. I really like this pic, though. Fantastic use of a limited palette. Good work.

[Lyuf]

I like my clown and your's edits too ^_^  Thanks all for criticism  and comments ^_^ I hope you grow fond my next work. It coming soon.

[Lyuf]

Here another one